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I just don't know by ~Dwood15:iconDwood15:



I don't know.



I just don't know any more.
What is life like?
Who is life like?

I just don't know.
I may have once known
But you have brought doubt

I made a mistake
And I fear what you will say.
I just don't know what to do.

I killed your love.
you damaged my heart
I just don't know.

Where can I go?
Who can I go to?
I crushed your baby.

I took your children.
in my own blindness,
I killed them.

I just don't know anymore.
I don't know that I ever knew before.

And now I ask,
Will you forgive me?
©2009 ~Dwood15
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terrible attempt. Comes from the heart though.

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:iconaunshi:
That's an amazing set of words you have there. The flow is rough, but it fits perfectly with the tone of the poem. The emotion you put into this is very clear, I can nearly feel it. Very cool.

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;)

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:icondragontrove:
Very well written, my friend.

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thanks ;)

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Anytime. ^^

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:icontheflyingdutchman84:
You should attach that to a moody rhythm and extend that into a song.

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Perhaps...

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omg this is really something~~:iconiloveyouplz:

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